Hi Ryan,

My problem with your pic is not with detail, but with a matter of composition..

You have 2 cars on the highway, and both are heading out of the picture. This tends to drag the eye towards the edges of the pic, to see where they are going, and of course, they're going to errrmmm... whatever can't be seen.

Suggestion: Rotate both cars 180 degrees (and since you're in a RHD area, change lanes) and try that. It might be an idea to slightly turn one of the cars so that it looks like it is waiting to enter the Inn's entry. That would further help focus attention on the Inn (which I suspect is where you want attention to be...)

Also the female(?) that's crossing the road is also leading the eye away from what should be the "focal point". Maybe have her(?) crossing towards the Inn?

Cheers,
Diolma

Message edited on: 12/06/2005 15:32 1st edit was to correct some typos. 2nd edit is to say: Great model! If all you're trying to do in the image is perfect it, then ignore everything above...

Message edited on: 12/06/2005 15:36