Are you up for some critique?

I think you're doing a very good job so far. The only problem I have is with the lip-synch. The timing is definitely off in some parts, and there needs to be more ancillary facial movement. You did a wonderful job with most of the primary movements, but your phonemes need to be tweeked manually for a more natural appearance. Also, as mentioned, the bending on that dark-haired girl needs a lot of refinement.

It wouldn't hurt to add some motion blur, especially at the end, where the ship is accelerating into warp.

I like the POV in the opening shot.

Message edited on: 12/08/2005 18:28