I really like this photo and what you've done with it. As for critique -- your art, in whatever form, makes me go outside my own "vision". (for lack of a better word) I cannot critique something that makes me think and that makes me view things in a different way. I can only take it in. Does that make sense? :) I think of photography as art in itself and also as a tool or medium that can be used as a base or enhancement to something new. I don't think there are hard and fast rules. The interpretation or perception lives inside the person behind the camera. ~Lisa