ok, let's go through it. 1. Everything is gray. It is not christmas, it is funeral (yes or no?) 2. This snow is not a snow. Have you seen a snowy street? You know, with path through the snow, where it is stamped with shoeprints, and where snow is untouched - it's nice and blue. Yours is just....dirt (yes or no?) 3. One of the scene has no snow falling. Snow snow snow - wow, no snow, though the camera is still on the street (yes or no?) 4. Many, many typing errors. Not knowing the language is not an excuse, you could consult with someone (yes or no?) 5. Where is the story? Old town outside - sci fi interiors inside? Where is the connection?! Or this sci-fi interior was put because of the theme? (yes or no?) 6. Character animation inside the sci fi interior is very poor. This figure is walking like it needs to go to the toilet (yes or not?) 7. Overall there isn't much point in this animation. If you remove the words and the santa at the end there's no way to know it is about christmas (yes or no?) To the guys that will be annoyed that I am commenting someone elses work - note that I asked for permission and received it.