Daniel, This is a very stylish and fine panel-story. I especially appreciate your use of color. Most people who attempt this style either are so intimidated by BlackAndWhite style, they never develop a distinctive color pallet and usage. Very effective, especially your reds. I like the choices you have made in "noise" in the backgrounds. And your character poses have life to them. I like the way you slice your panels, quite rhythmic and counter-balanced. This invites the reader's interest. Question: are you using the "glow" effect in After Effects (one of my favorites)? I noticed one typo/spelling: it's 'forty' not 'fourty'. Best of fortune to you on this ambitious effort! Really enjoyed it. Hope you complete by the NY show time. ::::: Opera :::::