Forum: Writers


Subject: Winter haiku mini-challenge

netsia opened this issue on Dec 22, 2005 ยท 85 posts


TheAlex posted Sat, 31 December 2005 at 10:29 AM

Snow-flakes fall in hand,
they melt just as they land there.
I still wish for more.


I really have no idea why I didn't start my Haiku with the last word of the previous post, as I was completely aware of the rules! I've even looked at every previous Haiku to see if one ended in 'see' and I made some sort of error that way. Ah well, just keep checking that syllable count...

Message edited on: 12/31/2005 10:29