darkness_02 opened this issue on Jan 15, 2006 ยท 8 posts
jfike posted Sun, 15 January 2006 at 3:37 PM
Looks great. You might want to check some spelling though. My comments are in brackets. Like to see what other artest are doing... Come take a look at some of the top name in bryce. [I believe you want "artists" and "names" in this sentence.][Also capitalize bryce.] Sick of the same sites over and over again.. come and take a look at what really out there. ["what's" instead of "what"] Like to know what the picture of the mouth is... come and take a look and vote for next mouths [ "month" and "months" instead of "mouth" and "mouths"] [Also change "Mouth" to "Month" in the caption above the Galaxy Studio graphic.]