Forum: Animation


Subject: My short in progress - Hit me, and Crit me!

pentamiter_beastmete opened this issue on Jan 21, 2006 ยท 4 posts


luvver_3d posted Fri, 27 January 2006 at 5:27 PM

There isn't much to crit here except possibly the editing, as mentioned. The style is great, and the animation is solid from what I can see. I love the camera work.

On the negative, definitely too many fades; too soon and too often in most of the shots. As a trailer, I don't think you're letting some of the shots progress far enough to tease the viewer. The editing seems more frustrating than appetizing.

Message edited on: 01/27/2006 17:29