Depending on how tortured he is, you might consider tilting his head forward a bit. Right now it's erect, which suggests he isn't totally "broken."

BTW, I like the little head shakes you've got going there.

Regarding the materials, the pants look like they are a lighter material than the shirt. That seems a bit backward but that is purely a subjective thing. It didn't strike me as 'wrong' or something that needed to be changed. It just conveyed that the character is obviously not from my Texan culture. Our shirts are usually lighter than our blue jeans.

I hear Californians wear thin cotton pants. Maybe he's from there?

[grin] On re-observation I just noticed that the top of his shirt sleeves do not follow the curve of his shoulder and arm. They stick out. That might need to be adjusted.

Message edited on: 01/30/2006 10:33

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