I watched V1 first. I loved what I saw but was a bit frustrated because the vocals were so low in the mix that I couldn't hear what she was saying in parts of it. I love those fat synths! I then watched the second one and was a bit confused because of the changes in the music but was pleased that I could hear her voice. As it progressed I realized that I liked the music better. Even though I love those fat synths, leaving them out at the very beginning caused the piece to feel like it was "building" so there was a higher emotional peak. I could hear her vocals better all the way through, but I think I'd still pull them up a bit. BTW, I love what you did visually. The environment reflected in the jiggly eyes is a very cool touch. You've obviously put a lot of work into this and it shows. You get two thumbs up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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