Margana opened this issue on Mar 07, 2006 ยท 31 posts
3DGuy posted Tue, 07 March 2006 at 6:34 PM
GAH!.. rendo killed my lengthy reply.. so here goes again: 1: I like the play of likes in this one. Maybe cut the left part a bit so that the post in the foreground is at the position where the corner of the house is now. However that may make your picture too square if you don't like square pictures. Also the whites of the house have a funky noise/colour thing going. Is that just camera noise or jpg compression artifacts? Try ticking the (brightness) curve in the middle a bit up. 2: It's a bit busy. I don't know where to look. There is too much too see and I don't have a real focal point/subject. Too bad about the tree being cropped out like that. 3: Nice cloudscape. It feels like the picture is tilted a bit to the left. I'd probably crop out part of the dark area to the right, it's a bit prominent, and maybe half the area the grass takes. 4: I'd like to see a colour version of this. I'm missing variations in the greys, now it's just a grey mass with not enough contrast. 5: I quite like this one. But it does look a bit dark to me. That's probably because there's a big dark spot in the middle. Try making a tight crop on the beads on the right leaving the height intact, leaving about as much space to the left as you have now to the right. just my unprofessional opinion :) Hmm I don't think I ever commented on anyones pictures quite this lenghty :P
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