I concur with the reasons Rykk and Kansas mentioned for not offering constructive criticism :-) As to improving colour choices: Before starting to finalise an image always try at least 10 different palettes on each layer (different colours, rates of colour change etc.) and always tweak a palette, never leave it as it was "set" i.e. tweak whether you're using preset palettes or random ones. Do this even if you had a preconceived idea as to what colour you wanted the image - you'll often find an alternative that works even better. I probably try hundreds of palettes out per layer before finally tweaking - the fact that I usually end up with a result in earthtones is just me ;-)

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