Overall it is coming along very well:) The only thing that bothers these tired old eyes is that it is too bright in the background but I don't know how you could tone it down without losing the nice effect you're getting. If you are attempting to create a fog effect, I noticed some cloned on her shoulder, you could look at Weird weather, I think I picked it up at 3dcommune or RDNA has some nice fog/weather props or Nerds. His is in the MP here. What ever you decide, keep up the good work.

I must remember to remember what it was I had to remember.