Hi. I'm trying to create a comic based in poser figures. There are some billion problems... but wich I want to focus right now is the language. English is not my mother language, so I'm not able to write a convincin' text. Would any of you help me? This is one image and the text... << My name is Rachel Dubrois, from New Orleans. 28 Yrs old, I work as a journalist in a small weekly magazine. It's my first job after finishing University. I usually write some words about social events or local news. Nothing interesting. But with the death of a young marine from Luisiana in Irak, all the 'good' journalists where occupied, so the ' haunted mansion' article was assigned to me... Mr. Vermont in person rang me to tell me the news. >>

The second image... Hope you can help me.

Attached Link: http://www.renderosity.com/viewed.ez?galleryid=1184655&Start=1&Artist=zarquen&ByArtist=Yes

BTW... hope you like it

Message edited on: 03/24/2006 18:05

Looks--- and sound good so far :D

i like it. your english is very good. just read some novels in english to get more used to the language. love esther

I can help if you still need some assistance. --Rebekah--

I would recommend a spell checker as well as the graphics software you are using. Using "street spelling" for proper names gives the reader the concept that the writer doesn't care enough about their story, or their craft, to look up the word and spell it correctly. Sorry, I teach college composition and writing...you'd be surprised how many essys and resarch papers I grade every week that have Instant Messaging abreviated language and just bad spelling and grammar...and how many students are baffled when they fail a paper for those reasons.

If you need some assistance in basic grammar, IM me from here and I'll help when I can. I just noticed, I am using my wife's computer and forgot to log her out and myself in. My IM is cedarwolf.

Message edited on: 03/26/2006 08:25

Thank you all. Here goes the two first pages, done with Comic Book Creator (Demo). Hope you like it... BTW... how is the spell of them??

second one...