Forum: Writers


Subject: Spring Haiku?

TheAlex opened this issue on Mar 14, 2006 ยท 202 posts


Margana posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 3:55 PM

Wind touching my skin
With soft unseen caresses
So gentle,so sweet.

Actually I like this as the last line...

And plays with my hair.

But it seemed less spring-like,lol.And 'hair' would certainly be a strange beginning word for the next one! ;^)

Message edited on: 03/30/2006 15:58

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