I really need to see it in better detail to help you the jpeg image is just pure shit looking through my aol browser =-. I like the one on the left better but I think if you made the one on the right darker it would be fantastic and it would have a nice gloomy look to it. DD the scrolling marquee in my best guess is a set of radial spheres with a low light setting on a circular path around the building. Thats the best way I can think of doing it.