First, I meant no disrespect to you. What I meant on her being too dark, is really what I meant. you are showing her now on a background that contrasts against her, so she is visable. But Use her in a neutral background or a interior aor "Tavern set" you'll have to pucnh up the light to make out her details. and if you use more lighter toned characters. they will look washed out because of the light you have to use with her. As I had said, You stayed to the original description very well. but actually using description makes it almost useless to make drow. because they either wash out the scen with all the lights to see them, or they become black wholes and you cannot tell what they look like. That is why I opted for grey, they light better and blend in with other skin tones.