Forum: Writers


Subject: Alliteration Challenge

Drekinn opened this issue on May 08, 2006 · 86 posts


Drekinn posted Wed, 10 May 2006 at 1:53 AM

Haha.. great work,  though it's a little confusing at the beginning due to the inclusion of 'dour docks'; omitting these words would make the sentence more structurally sound. I'm not exactly sure what 'dock' means in this context; perhaps you could explain?

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Natalia the nocturnal nymphomaniac naughtily nuzzled the neck of a neighbouring nightclubber, nudging him nearer.

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Letter: R
Theme: Urgency

Drekinn
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"Let words be your palette."