Forum: Writers


Subject: Summer Haiku?

hanevi opened this issue on May 16, 2006 ยท 210 posts


hanevi posted Tue, 16 May 2006 at 7:40 AM

Ok, sorry, couldn't resist that...

Seriously now-

shimmering heat haze,
eyelids burn with dusty sting;
summer commuting

I have to commute two hours to work and two hours back (about 54 Kms totally). I suppose that figures..

Here's another in the 3-5-3 form-

sweaty back,
ragged bloodshot looks,
bus driver