I like it!!!

Suggestion (there's always one of those)..

I honestly didn't notice the little figure clinging tight there until I looked again. My eye saw the balcony rail, zoomed along it, shot off the end, saw the far buildings., wandered back along the road...

Maybe change the helmet to a bright red??? (IE, Draw attention to it). Or other textures on the poor little chap/chapess. Although I expect you already have that in mind as an enhav=ncement..

Just a thought...

Camera angle seems to me to be just fine (as is POV etc.) Just needs that little figure to be a little more "obvious". IMVHO...

Cheers,
Diolma