Very nice Ryan!

To me, the building itself looks very good. Don't know if the brown wall at the bottom has any texture. If so, it needs a bump map boost or different lighting to show texture, though it IS far away. The roof texture also looks a bit flat.

I'm not as pleased with the scene. The POV, creek and cattails are great, but the lighting of the vegetation seems a bit flat and formless. I'd add contrast and darken the shadows (but not so much that you can't see a bit of detail in them).

Few details. The guy behind the golf cart should maybe be moved away from it? A bit confusing now. Maybe put some planters around the trees - look kind of fake where the tree turnks go straight into the grass.

 Looking good!