Yes, much better. I notice the 2 first trees on the left look almost like clones of eachother. You might rotate on a bit. Those 2 foreground rocks are starting to steal the scene. Shape/size/color all make them stand out. I'd sink them into the water quite a lot and color them more neutral gray.

Stained glass overhangs? Sounds like a maintenance nightmare, lol. I agree with Chipp's comments on the clouds.

Good progress. I agree about WIP critiques - very valuable.