Me wants the club, me wants ^.^

Eyes are good, you can leave them this way. What I'd change is his lips texture - it looks a bit like a poor goth make-up. Maybe you could try how does he look like with lips of same color as rest of head texture, or with narrow lips of dark skin surronded with band-like area of normal skin ? (hope you understand what I'm talking about - kinda hard to explain it, as English is not my native language).

Whatever you'll decide, I'm in line for downloading him when he's ready ^.^

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