Nicely improved. I'm getting in late here, but I think the real problem with the original was there wasn't any interaction between the figures. They were just in the same scene. Now you can sense the relationship between them. I think that was what missing in the first go.

This is not my "second childhood". I'm not finished with the first one yet.

Time flies like an arrow; fruit flies like a banana.

"I'd like to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather....not screaming in terror like the passengers on his bus." - Jack Handy