Forum: Writers


Subject: Summer Haiku?

hanevi opened this issue on May 16, 2006 ยท 210 posts


hanevi posted Tue, 20 June 2006 at 4:23 AM

Hey, nice work with radar! Our internet lines were down till yesterday evening, so no posting for me all these days. Nice to be back.

heat shimmer
hallucination;
my eyes bleed

There! Finally, a line with just one word. I've been trying to get a one word line for ages, but it's been like a mirage. Imagine a Haiku with just three words, one for each line! Who of us is going to get it???? :D

Sorry, 'bleed' s not too easy.