Forum: Writers


Subject: Summer Haiku?

hanevi opened this issue on May 16, 2006 · 210 posts


hanevi posted Thu, 22 June 2006 at 5:00 AM

drained of life,
encounter with sun:
lassitude

Great work, Drekinn! I thought 'bleed'  would cause a roadblock, but it didn't.

OK! With 'lassitude', the American form Haiku gauntlet of a three word Haiku is thrown. Sorry! This sentence sounds terrible, but I'm sure you know what I mean! :D