Wonderfully written,Hanevi.I could practically smell the sweaty bodies and feel them pressing against me in the heat.That would be maddening,indeed.You have truly created an oppressive atmosphere,here.I felt uncomfortable just reading it!

Sorry to hear this was a real event.You have my sincerest sympathy. :^(

As to my writing...I doubt I'll get in 'under the gun'...As I said,with the amount of rewrites I do,it seems almost impossible!But thanks for the vote of confidence. :^)

Marlene <")

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"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno