Forum: Writers


Subject: June Mini-Challenge

midrael opened this issue on Jun 08, 2006 · 15 posts


Margana posted Sat, 01 July 2006 at 2:06 AM

Okay guys...This totally,totally stinks.... It's only a piece of something...and it's after the cut-off date,to boot,lol.

But I did try to do something. So I thought I'd at least show you that I made the effort,lol. As I said before,I'm no writer. I'm just here to have fun and dabble...sigh...

Remember...I said I know it stinks...okay?


The entire city sweats tonight...

Granite buildings gleam and glisten,
as if shedding the daily efforts spent therein.

Thirsty sidewalks lit by impotent rainfall,

falsely promise respite...

while  the humidity hangs in the air like an unwanted lover.


That's it,lol.  Isn't that pathetic?But I tried.😊

Marlene <")

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