Forum: Writers


Subject: Summer Haiku?

hanevi opened this issue on May 16, 2006 ยท 210 posts


hanevi posted Thu, 13 July 2006 at 6:11 AM

sunrise pale
through hazy, grey sky,
monsoon comes

Sorry, Marlene! I know that was a a bit too tough for enjoyment. I like yours; there's a subtle way you have with words. :)

That's a gentle one, TwoP! Very nice!

The rains are here! Now floods and disease will follow, but at least the heat's lessened. :)