Forum: Writers


Subject: Summer Haiku?

hanevi opened this issue on May 16, 2006 · 210 posts


hanevi posted Wed, 19 July 2006 at 3:13 AM

beautiful,
pecking at puddles,
rain-song, sweet

Although the Monsoon is hard on us here, it's also very beautiful. I was watching the drops fall on little pools of water. How welcome after the scorching heat! Your Haiku is lovely, with a gentle lilt. I love these ones that you write.

I'm sure the silly edge will return at an unexpected time, Marlene. 'I'll be back...' Ha!