Forum: Writers


Subject: Summer Haiku?

hanevi opened this issue on May 16, 2006 · 210 posts


hanevi posted Thu, 20 July 2006 at 3:09 AM

sand, ochre stretches,
I call, words have no echo,
wilderness listens

Oh, that's lovely Marlene. There are such deep undertones, and profound parables hidden.

Hi Drekinn! I feel so guilty about the alliteration thread which I enjoyed reading so much, but can't get time to write. Tsk! what do I do with myself?