Forum: Writers


Subject: Summer Haiku?

hanevi opened this issue on May 16, 2006 · 210 posts


WeeLaddie posted Tue, 25 July 2006 at 4:42 AM

Nice one Drekinn, conjures up scenes of summer forest fires. I'll post my "Flashes" haiku now. though I know it's redundant in the last/first word sequence. It was penned and has to be aired, or so my ego's telling me.

Flashes of sunlight

Venetian blinded smoochers

Under the boardwalk 

 

Remember, first word in sequential train  is "Burn".