Forum: Writers


Subject: August Challenge - Diamante Poetry

midrael opened this issue on Aug 07, 2006 · 24 posts


heartnsoul posted Mon, 21 August 2006 at 6:25 PM

FLAT?

ocean

buoyant salty

 fishing sailing exploring

majestic  adventure hypnotic  horizon

sparkling unforgiving rocking

turbulent vast

sea

Whoa this wasn't easy! I even wound up changing words so that I would keep the diamond shape. I initially had the word "flat?" in the 6th line, but also didn't want to give up "vast" so for a lighter side put it in the title.  I rarely write without a title. While I know this is an exercise its just a habit I have. I don't know what took me so long to come here, but I'm so glad I finally did. I'm genuinely excited about your forum!
Michelle