Yup, what dp said. I'd also add that having the sword blade directly in front of the character's face is a bad idea. The human eye is naturally drawn to the face first, but having the sword blade where it is forces the eye to refocus ,making the image more complicated to view. Secondly, from a composition point of view, there is no reason for the figure to be where it is, no explanation as to why it is in that pose, perhaps flying broken glass to suggest the figure has just exploded through the window? Something anyway to put the figure in context with the background. Hope this helps.

Jack