Maybe you can make a compromise... something loosely based on this effect (see image I attached

That way you have a more uniform background so that the stands out and is legible, but it doesn't split the picture. Hopefully makes it flow little better. Mine is quck and dirty mockup, so the quality is poor, and you can choose a better looking brown or make other improvements.

I agree with what others said about the text, more margin would look good :)
Just my 2c

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