not bad for a first try the clothing texture needs work -- it looks very 2d. drop her to the floor, neither of her feet are touching it. her pose is a little stiff, work on the neck and arms. Add a better skin texture to her than the default as well, and make sure you set the eyebrow, lip, nipple, etc colors to white and texture those as well -- they look very artificial if you color them with poser colors. otherwise good work, this is a hell of a lot better than my first work.