I guess  I'll stick my nose in again with my observations, haagen-das is nice alright, but to me it looks like her back has been indulging while her front worked out some.  I like her front a lot but at this stage the back looks like it belongs to an older unfitter person - kind of a split personality. Heh.  I think the work in this is terrific,  and know that  we tend to get so involved in the intricacies that it's hard to see  the overall effect. This is where fresh eyes may help, which is obviously why you asked for comments.

But they are only comments of course and you must please yourself in the end. It's not  at all unheard of to have fat go to the backside and have  perky boobies  and a toned tummy.

The male face is full of character but I agree the eye needs to be placed lower as illustrated by tekmonk.  Great stuff Patorak, look forward to more as you progress.

Cheers!
Masha