Forum: Writers


Subject: Winter Haiku Challenge

Drekinn opened this issue on Dec 05, 2006 · 120 posts


Dinhi posted Sat, 13 January 2007 at 10:11 AM

Dust fallen snowflakes;
Shake the dawns early rising;
Moisture beads liquid.

They didn't teach syllables in Colleges....I am told it was somewhere between 1st and 3rd grade.  I was home schooled through 7th grade and went right on into english comp...lol  I get it now and the beauty of that is a reminder that learning is an event that will never stop!  

Thanks Drekinn for the constructive crits!

Namaste...it's universal  [ =