Her right hand (without glove) You mentioned you were going to change it, that seems to be the most prominent problem that I notice. To me, the forearm and thumb should stay straight and it is the pinky side of the hand that should break an angle at the forearm in order to look like she's holding the rifle comfortably and still have the other hand close to her body. In her current position right hand position the other hand would have to be further out, away from her chest. my 2 good luck