Hi di,

Shoulders look "hunched up" ... perhaps reduce the horiz angle (bend) slightly.
Also, check the "Hip-Shoulder" relationship using the "Guides" under the "Display [menu] using the Front (ortho) camera.

Try unclenching the fingers to a spead position.

Just  couple of quick observations.

Overall pose looks very good.

cheers,
dr geep
;=]

Remember ... "With Poser, all things are possible, and poseable!"

cheers,

dr geep ... :o]

edited 10/5/2019