BJ: Much better. You see how the first word can determine the direction in which the poem takes? (This heightens the challenge). A most excellent poem by the way; a touching storyline with thoughtful characters; I especially admire the rhyming.

One last thing, if you could precede the name of the next poem with 'Title: ' it would help to distinguish it better. Thanks, and keep up the great work everyone.

Drekinn
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"Let words be your palette."