Forum: Photography


Subject: Constructive Critique for March 22, 2007

TwoPynts opened this issue on Mar 21, 2007 · 22 posts


Burpee posted Thu, 22 March 2007 at 10:05 AM

HUGS....Fantastic Work....OHHHH....I love it

Just kidding :)  Kort, you have improved so much over the last year and I enjoy viewing your works.   You've put a lot of effort into improving and it shows.  

With this particular photo I would have made a comment about being here in Miami and on one of these cruise ships in the past.  It holds interest because I've been here and I like the POV but there is a lot in shadow here.  Think Inshaala made a good point with the perspective.  My eye is drawn to the smallest boat so the rest of the image is discarded by my eye.  Less of the nearest boat in the image would bring the focal point into the photo and, imo, be more pleasing.

I was on Soveriegn of the Seas :)