I think this is a WONDERFUL idea and I have already had several VERY HELPFUL suggestions and I am considering re-doing the picture and posting the results of what I have learned! 

Let's keep this up and going!

One things I have learned from this is it is a bit difficult to critique! Some of the artwork is very good it's just not my "style" but that doesn't mean it isn't well done! That's the tough part! Also, if a piece is really impressive to me, I am going to say so. That doesn't mean I am patronizing or "sucking up", it means I truly think the pice is impressive! :)