first of all, people have disagreed with you, not flamed you.  second of all, that's a completely different idea.  isn't that exactly what the "render remix" thread in the daz pc forum is?  sounds cool, but i'm not sure why you'd post it here?  if you want to do that, just start a thread for it.

though it's funny you bring this up.  i had been thinking about how it would have been much simpler to draw my reaction to Anasta's piece than it was to try to describe it.  sometimes, when the change you're suggesting is visual, it can be easier to just sketch it out than explain it.  one of the best critiques i've ever read was a reaction to kurt lundqvist's work.  the person explained how to make a more dynamic composition/camera angle, and it was so clear because he posted sketches of what he meant.  and it was great information for anyone interested in doing comics.

i've been prefacing my comments with the critique group, because i'm trying to really do an analysis.  as Tissaia mentioned, i didn't want to seem like a troll or overly harsh.  it's basically my, "the artist asked for this, i'm not just randomly getting critical on them" tag.