OK guys I'm gonna pull this back to topic... I edited my last upload using as many of the critiques as I felt it needed personally... I added a shadow to the hairline (considering my original one got softened out LOL) I got rid of the blaring white spot, added some lashes and did something about the grey-ish lips... 

No need to comment again just lemme know here or send me a site email letting me know what you think.

Thanks so much for this guys, I really think its taught me alot and we've only made it through a single upload LOL!

Hugs!