I see your point on that. But the overall tone of your wording seemed to me more focused on slamming DAZ-- "they failed," "they didn't think," "even sillier," etc.-- than on pointing out the benefits of your product. I think a better approach would be something like "Pose Magic makes V4 even easier to use and more versatile. Here's how--" It's just a matter of shifting the emphasis. Hope that makes sense.