Hmm, titles for the picture ....... possibilities?  "Dark riders"  "Chasing the storm", or "Oncoming dark".

As far as critique goes, I'm honest, and I'll be honest here.  If an image disturbs me (this has happened for various reasons), Its a genre I really don't care for,  I will actually leave a comment like this:

"This image may very well be good, however, since it is not my taste, I cannot give an unbiased critique".   I do want posters to know I "am" looking, but also let them know in whatever the endeavor, i probably will not leave comments on future updates of the same image.  I think thats fair, at least in my opinion.  I would rather leave that, than no comment at all, and have some think I either don't care, or are "ignoring" their work.

There are certain things though, I will, with no hesitation go for the jugular LOL.  This may or may not be liked, but I hope its helpful.  IN particular, haha, I am a "breast snob".   For those that insist on doing nudes (i like nudes, a lot actually), I'll go there! LOL  I do hope that doesnt offend anyone, but i often find the gravitational pull, encasement, size shape.......so on can totally break an otherwise good image.