I would suggest posting the image in the gallery or the Art Theory Forum for input otherwise this thread will be taken over by critiquing instead of a place for people to sign up.

"It is good to see ourselves as others see us. Try as we may, we are never
able to know ourselves fully as we are, especially the evil side of us.
This we can do only if we are not angry with our critics but will take in good
heart whatever they might have to say." - Ghandi