Forum: Photography


Subject: Constructive Critique -- 04/23/2007

TwoPynts opened this issue on Apr 23, 2007 ยท 31 posts


cameraobscura2 posted Tue, 24 April 2007 at 12:15 AM

Hi Kort, When I first looked at it in the gallery I wanted to comment there, but now that I am here i will tell you that at first I was puzzled since it is not up to your usual standard. Now I see that one suggested to focus in on the mushroom, which is something I would not have done as i look at he image more in abstract terms as to t he patterns found on the surace of the water. The area I would focus is the upper left section but I would not nclude a leaf as I find it distracting in an abstract. The reason for the focus on abstract is the play between of water and the branches anlong with the reflections. I hope it has helped. Thank you for sharing. egmont