I'm not a character creator, but I know what I like when I see one.

To me the eyes don't look real. I think overall they are too large in dimension and take up too much space on her face.  Also the white  parts seem plastic, especially in the inner corner areas, and they look blood shot.

I like the face, she's very pretty.  But the eyes just don't seem to work.

How do you fix it?  I don't know that's why I don't do character creation and texturing, hehe

I think you are on the right track and once you have the eyes ironed out she will be a nice looking character.

"It is good to see ourselves as others see us. Try as we may, we are never
able to know ourselves fully as we are, especially the evil side of us.
This we can do only if we are not angry with our critics but will take in good
heart whatever they might have to say." - Ghandi